55 Flash Fiction - Bad day.
Posted on December 21st, 2007 by On a Limb w/ Claudia
Bad day
“Expect great things today, Capricorn!”
But everything was wrong today!
No hot water for a shower. Frank drank the last cup of coffee. She missed the bus. Walking into her review, her boss noticed a stain on her blouse.
Needing to resolve this once and for all, Reggie placed the call.
“Mom? Was I adopted?”
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Welcome to my life :-).
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Cheers!
Definitely adopted. No Capricorn ever had a stain and missed a ride on the same day. Great story.
Here’s the sequel in even fewer words:
She wasn’t really a Capricorn, but a Cancer.
Josie - It’s a busy season. Hopefully things will “right” themselves for you.
D. - Exactly my point.
Heart in SF - I think you and Josie are both Cancers…. you have a point.
(((((Claudia)))))
Merry Christmas Claudia! You have been a real inspiration to me this year.
He went to the florist and left with a bouquet.
Neither he or the shopgirl saw the hibernating spider in the flowers.
She found it as she vased the flowers and thought it another sign of his feelings for her. She left the next day.
He was bit by the now not hibernating spider.
Peace
TWM
Heeeey, I’m a Capricorn!
Popping in to wish you and yours a Merry Christmas, Claudia!
Ppppssstt, by the way…my b-day is the 30th
XBox games won’t be turned down.
No Nonsense Girl - Did you hug me wearing your new red bra!?!?
Moobs - Ah shuck Moobs. You say the nicest things.
TWM - That’s good - wanna join the 55 friday madness?
Slick - Yeah, hee hee, I thought of that.